well, there were some things I felt like I needed to do, but I mainly did exactly what ~star~ told me.

Also, I didn’t get rid of the repetition of sheets 2,0,3, because it’s a rock song, there for it’s going to have 2 verses, and 2 choruses before the bridge.
Old player!

EDIT: I changed the hi- hats in the chorus to cymbal #1, props to antonim

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