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Submitted UnPeautiful Pink, 0.00, 7 ratings, 476 views, 10 comments, Jan 27 2012 11:20 AM | Last updated Jan 27 2012 10:44 PM
Yay! It can be considerate my new (and fortunately.. completed) Song
See In Youtubee!
| ID: | 67044 |
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| Length: | 3:53 |
| File: | http://www.notessimo.net/uploads/ccd3a732ab884ba6ecb5d422e5ad787e.note |
lol that ending. great song
Thanks for the Feature
I made a video for the song
I made a video for the song
Man the main problem I have with the song is I can just imagine the palm muted guitar being replace by either the Acoustic Guitar or a Piano and it would just be so much more supportive...
Whoa, that was great! I loved the chordal section with the Strat, The solo's were great, too!
this was not too shabby, but some of the instruments were awkwardly loud and it just ruins the whole piece for me:S
Im reffering to the crash, the flute and the piano. I also think i heard a few disharmonies somewhere in the part of the song beginning in sheet 25, but i wasnt able to pinpoint where. That whole part of the song also seemed a bit too crowded, and it was like there were waaay too many difirent melodies going on at the same time. Although im sure theyre awesome indivudally they simply did not do it for me:(
OH WELLZ! Enough with the negativities. I really liked the guitar solo, and the beat was pretty nice (although it could have used a bit of variation).
The chores in sheet 19 were also awesome and sounds like something i could have made myself:P It was a nice idea to use the glass/nice as the bassline in those same sheets.
I hope you dont take my critique as an insult to your track. I can assure you i did not intend to offend...
Ps. The string thingies in sheet 9+ cant be heard either and i was wondering why they were there.
Im reffering to the crash, the flute and the piano. I also think i heard a few disharmonies somewhere in the part of the song beginning in sheet 25, but i wasnt able to pinpoint where. That whole part of the song also seemed a bit too crowded, and it was like there were waaay too many difirent melodies going on at the same time. Although im sure theyre awesome indivudally they simply did not do it for me:(
OH WELLZ! Enough with the negativities. I really liked the guitar solo, and the beat was pretty nice (although it could have used a bit of variation).
The chores in sheet 19 were also awesome and sounds like something i could have made myself:P It was a nice idea to use the glass/nice as the bassline in those same sheets.
I hope you dont take my critique as an insult to your track. I can assure you i did not intend to offend...
Ps. The string thingies in sheet 9+ cant be heard either and i was wondering why they were there.
Well done.
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this was not too shabby, but some of the instruments were awkwardly loud and it just ruins the whole piece for me:S
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Im reffering to the crash, the flute and the piano.
Fuuuu.. well continuing..
I had to louder the piano for the transicion :/ but this is the most annoyng in the song.. the bridge is more louder than the guitar solo 
Ps. The string thingies in sheet 9+ cant be heard either and i was wondering why they were there.
I wanted put some back the guitar.. as background music
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I also think i heard a few disharmonies somewhere in the part of the song beginning in sheet 25, but i wasnt able to pinpoint where.
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That whole part of the song also seemed a bit too crowded, and it was like there were waaay too many difirent melodies going on at the same time.
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Ps. The string thingies in sheet 9+ cant be heard either and i was wondering why they were there.
I wanted put some back the guitar.. as background music
It would be even more awesome if it had lyrics!
How do I feature songs?