On The Moon
Submitted Roastmasters, 4.82, 148 ratings, 1591 views, 30 comments, Mar 04 2010 05:07 PM | Last updated Mar 04 2010 05:07 PM
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The chorus bit thing looks nice enough to eat. I was a bit iffy on the end and the racket in the middle, but the rest made up for it.
WOWOWOWOW!!!!!
I LOVE this song
IS grear
Hardwork has a reward
IS grear
Its about a dream
Or a nightmare
No matter what, I LIKE
WIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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The chorus bit thing looks nice enough to eat. I was a bit iffy on the end and the racket in the middle, but the rest made up for it.
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The chorus bit thing looks nice enough to eat. I was a bit iffy on the end and the racket in the middle, but the rest made up for it.
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The chorus bit thing looks nice enough to eat. I was a bit iffy on the end and the racket in the middle, but the rest made up for it.
I'm not sure if I can comfortably live with the fact that someone out there wants to eat my songs >____<
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I'm not sure if I can comfortably live with the fact that someone out there wants to eat my songs >____<
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Yeah Anthony.
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Yeah Anthony.
sorry muse...
..where are u from?
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sorry muse...
..where are u from?
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sorry muse...
...where are u from?
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sorry muse...
...where are u from?
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On the western side.
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On the western side.
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On the western side.
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Greece!
I...just...love...this...song...
how do you make your transitions so smooth? i mean seriously. every time i try to i always get stupid gaps in my song
Wow. This song has been listened to 900+ times, but it has barely 100 votes.
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how do you make your transitions so smooth? i mean seriously. every time i try to i always get stupid gaps in my song
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how do you make your transitions so smooth? i mean seriously. every time i try to i always get stupid gaps in my song
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how do you make your transitions so smooth? i mean seriously. every time i try to i always get stupid gaps in my song
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when you are making the song, the glowing line shows where does the next sheet start, so end the sheet just before the glowing line to make it smooth
OHHH ty! =D
i like the end
i feel dumb joining after this song was made, why couldnt my life be in fast forward, at least i joined long before the unpate ( about 6 months )
I'm jacking off to this song right now.
^So am I.
I remember that I didn't notice this song until after it got posted into Kamarai's "Space Game" thread, and thus I don't think I've ever given it a proper review.
It's always been a mixed opinion for me. The chorus is so good that you can't use the Synth Bass high anymore without it reminding anyone who's heard this song of the chorus, it's almost stealing. But to be honest, the chorus was really just a gold nugget in a murky river of bad decisions.
Intro's too long, and although it is somewhat interesting, it really gets old fast. The drumming kicks in really low, which leads to an amazing idea in having it rise from there to a normal pitch, but then it cuts of into a generic drum roll, no matter it being with the bass drum instead of a more conventional snare. The first break after the chorus starts somewhat decently, nothing wrong but nothing really standing out, but then the techno bass comes and just ruins the section. The worst part is the synth1 parts sound good, if you listen to them behind that bass, which just overshadows everything. Then yet another drum roll, this time with a snare, which sounds better but is even more uninspired. The next break sounds decent but there are two huge problems, one is that every sheet is played twice, and the drumming is just too powerful.
If it isn't obvious at this point, The biggest letdown to me was the drumming. It's boring in some places and a little too out there in others, not at all like your usual style. The roastmaster style peeks in in places, like whenever you use open hi hat #4, but for the most part, the drumming just...doesn't work. It doesn't support the song, and it isn't interesting enough to make up for it.
As for the rest of the solo, which is what I'm assuming it is, it just seems to progress to a point where it becomes so random and cluttered that you can hardly tell what's even going on. It all comes to a point in sheet 34, which is the most desperate transition I have ever seen. The synth just seems to be playing at complete random, and while this worked in the intro, it really just sounds unprofessional here.
But you know what? That ending stands in major contrast to the rest of the song. Adding synth 1 an octave above wasn't the best choice, but the rest is pure magnificence. All of it. I could listen to the chorus on loop for an hour and never get tired of it, and you ended up making it twice as good with the addition of one instrument. Taking away the drums worked, and the ending, the horrible, dissonant ending, was just perfect.
Overall, I think it needs a total rework, just better drumming and different instrument choices, and less repetition. I'm tempted to still give this a 4...but with great regret, I think it's only worth a 3.9/5, only for the amazing chorus and the stupendous ending.
It's always been a mixed opinion for me. The chorus is so good that you can't use the Synth Bass high anymore without it reminding anyone who's heard this song of the chorus, it's almost stealing. But to be honest, the chorus was really just a gold nugget in a murky river of bad decisions.
Intro's too long, and although it is somewhat interesting, it really gets old fast. The drumming kicks in really low, which leads to an amazing idea in having it rise from there to a normal pitch, but then it cuts of into a generic drum roll, no matter it being with the bass drum instead of a more conventional snare. The first break after the chorus starts somewhat decently, nothing wrong but nothing really standing out, but then the techno bass comes and just ruins the section. The worst part is the synth1 parts sound good, if you listen to them behind that bass, which just overshadows everything. Then yet another drum roll, this time with a snare, which sounds better but is even more uninspired. The next break sounds decent but there are two huge problems, one is that every sheet is played twice, and the drumming is just too powerful.
If it isn't obvious at this point, The biggest letdown to me was the drumming. It's boring in some places and a little too out there in others, not at all like your usual style. The roastmaster style peeks in in places, like whenever you use open hi hat #4, but for the most part, the drumming just...doesn't work. It doesn't support the song, and it isn't interesting enough to make up for it.
As for the rest of the solo, which is what I'm assuming it is, it just seems to progress to a point where it becomes so random and cluttered that you can hardly tell what's even going on. It all comes to a point in sheet 34, which is the most desperate transition I have ever seen. The synth just seems to be playing at complete random, and while this worked in the intro, it really just sounds unprofessional here.
But you know what? That ending stands in major contrast to the rest of the song. Adding synth 1 an octave above wasn't the best choice, but the rest is pure magnificence. All of it. I could listen to the chorus on loop for an hour and never get tired of it, and you ended up making it twice as good with the addition of one instrument. Taking away the drums worked, and the ending, the horrible, dissonant ending, was just perfect.
Overall, I think it needs a total rework, just better drumming and different instrument choices, and less repetition. I'm tempted to still give this a 4...but with great regret, I think it's only worth a 3.9/5, only for the amazing chorus and the stupendous ending.
