First song updated again. Added a bunch more stuff this time and made some very important edits like reducing tempo. Seemed like a good idea back then and it seems like a good idea right now. The new few parts make the name of the song, trying to make it dark, eerie, or stressful; only getting the dark and eerie part imo but I want all three.

Oh well.

EDIT: Also, give criticism if you want, whether it’s from increasing dynamics or from changing an entire verse line.

EDIT #2: Also, this is probably halfway-finished. Gonna make it hopefully to around 3-4 minutes because apparently 1-2 minutes songs aren’t goddamn good enough.