Provide Me Criticism

I would like criticism and tips so I can improve.
Please look through My Content - Songs and pick out things I do right and things I do wrong.
Please do this so I can do more right and eliminate my wrongs.

Thanks.

Try finding an existing post before creating your own: http://www.notessimo.net/topic/7306-criticism-requests/

Also, this link has a few good tips: http://www.notessimo.net/topic/7255-general-advice-for-making-good-music/