Utopia

This is realy amazing! how long did it take x3?

This is realy amazing! how long did it take x3?

Thank you! I made it in one day, but spent a few days polishing it.

sorry to say this nuse but I didn't like the song. Why you may ask? well one thing I really like in most songs is a very present melody thats easy to hear and enjoy, which you did great at some parts of the song, but as you started layering on more parts the melody would begin to be overshadowed by chords and backgrounds. a good example of this is sheet 57 and 58. But the slightly overshadowing background doesn't bother me as much as sheet's 15,40,51,61,43,and 42, the main problem I have with these is just the organ. it doesn't blend well with the other instruments when I listen to it :\. few other small things in sheet 5,8,9,32,33,38,39, you have a strings #2 on C that is off by a 16th note...don't know if its intentional or not but it bothers me. In sheet 62 I don't like the crash cymbals because they just sound off.

sorry to say this nuse but I didn't like the song. Why you may ask? well one thing I really like in most songs is a very present melody thats easy to hear and enjoy, which you did great at some parts of the song, but as you started layering on more parts the melody would begin to be overshadowed by chords and backgrounds. a good example of this is sheet 57 and 58. you're right, I kinda forgot about the melody.But the slightly overshadowing background doesn't bother me as much as sheet's 15,40,51,61,43,and 42, the main problem I have with these is just the organ. it doesn't blend well with the other instruments when I listen to it :\.I know what you mean, especially the Ab chord. I just thought it needed something heavy. few other small things in sheet 5,8,9,32,33,38,39, you have a strings #2 on C that is off by a 16th note...don't know if its intentional or not but it bothers me.Actually, that was intentional, But because I could never hear that note I left it. In sheet 62 I don't like the crash cymbals because they just sound off.Oh I never noticed that before! They sound terrible!

Thanks for criticizing!

I LOVE this song!!! Very creative and AWESOME!

I LOVE this song!!! Very creative and AWESOME!

Thanks!

It's REALLY VERY SUPER AWESOME!!!

It's REALLY VERY SUPER AWESOME!!!

Why THANK YOU.

Can I nominate this song for best chord progression ever?

Can I nominate this song for best chord progression ever?

I think these 2 songs have better.

Omg. This is freaking awesome!!

THIS IS AMAAZING!!!!!!can u make a remix to the song PLZZZ >W<

I loved it. how it was making that noise the whole time and how it was so slow. You should make more songs like that.

put some metal guitar in there so is then a Heavy Metal Version of Utopia please

[quote][/put some metal guitar in there so is then a Heavy Metal Version of Utopia please]


And how? LOL

That's weird.

[quote][/And how? LOL That's weird.]

to put a Heavy Metal part in the Utopia

the first 4 sheets i hear are from C harmonic Minor and somewhere further its getting from Eb Ionian to C Aeolian

I just remembered listening to this song time ago and now im like JEZUS I DON`T HAVE ENOUGH TIME TO LISTEN TO THIS! sorry its just realy long. =P

dude, you had to put more guitars in this cool song

erm, Nuse, where is the snail of yours?

Good song but it just needs additional polishing. Too many nuances that block its success. First, the counter-melody at the beginning and sheets 30-33, 36, 37 etc. in the strings needs to be louder. Otherwise it gets a dry tone that would be fuller with it. Also lowering the arpeggiated pianos there would help too. Also, there is too much cymbal happening here. This song should be focused on the awesome might I add, chord changes that integrate in the song. In fact, the crash could be taken out altogether. The trumpet fanfare was dead perfect but overshadowed by once again those annoying pianos on top of it. Great song altogether just needs some tweaking. 4/5 for me.

Sheet 7 is Brilliant, Sheets 15 to 56 are Fantastic, i even like the flutes on Sheet 8! The Organs at Sheet 22 are nice, The Rhodes At Sheet 24 are quite nice, The guitars are beautiful, but the Bass #4 can be a bit louder However, good job again, Nuse 5/5!!! *clicks LIKE button*


Next: Sheets 2,3,10,11 & 12 (which are eastereggs) sound like some of the sheets from my song: I Have to Miss Woodworking :'-( (i covered them while i added a Metal Guitar in Sheet 3 instead of strings #3 and a Vibraphone instead of the xylophone, sheet 2 with Rhodes #2,Fender Strat Guitar #1 & Church Organ #1 instead of Electric piano,Strings #2 & Rock Organ & my drums are more Metallica like than those on sheet 2 and on sheet 11 i put a Electric piano instead of the piano, added a Metal Guitar (with delay) & at sheet 12 i used a Metal Guitar instead of Strings #2 so i made it more Metal-ish)

this song is amazing

 

 

I would like to see some trumpet 2, but that's fine (in some of the earlier sheets

Huh. I never commented on my 4.5 song. LET'S REMEDY THAT :3