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The Feeble
By SteveHarris
Submitted by SteveHarris, Jan 11 2014 06:07 PM | Last updated Jan 11 2014 06:12 PM
strings cheery happy the feeble steveharris
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This one is a bit happier than normal. Also, a slow slower; less upbeat. Most of my songs are very frantic/upbeat, so I'd figure this is a welcome change. Need criticism to get better, so leave your two cents in the comments, please.
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4 Comments
Antonim
Jan 11 2014 10:08 PM
This sounds very awkward. Not a very catchy tune, either.
SteveHarris
Jan 11 2014 11:04 PM
OK, any suggestions?
ALI†3NS
Jan 12 2014 03:01 AM
Try changing the tempo and make transitions.
Malice
Jan 14 2014 10:06 AM
The concept's good, but I think you're taking the wrong approach to it.