Riffs And Solos
By THEFinalBoss
Submitted by Krawkyz, Jun 02 2010 08:57 PM | Last updated Jun 02 2010 08:57 PM
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- Executioner and ♫ Clearwater ♫ like this
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1 Comments
♫ Clearwater ♫
Dec 02 2012 10:37 PM
Sheet 0: Those drums at the beginning are too quiet. They are too simple as well. That bass riff... Repetitive. That clean guitar is only a bunch of notes..Sheet 1: Drum beat is too repeitive. That guitar riff is too abrupt and random. And ew, high fenders! Transition is needed to the bass.
Sheet 2: That bass is too loud. Tom drum solo is too long. And those snares at the end... *shudders*
Sheet 3: Cymbals too quiet. Ow! Now cymbals too loud.
Why do you repeat sheets 1 and 2?
Sheet 4: Ew, more high fenders. They're random, too, Ew, higher, higher, too high!
Sheet 5: Ew, more high fenders! Quiet, quiet, quiet, OW, YOU BLEW MY EARS OFF. Quiet, quiet, quiet, shahhhhhhh...
Overall, this is a critique of the purely negative variety. I did not include a single positive thing, and hopefully I've torn your first song to shreds. #hashtagYOSO. You only sting once, man. Only. Once