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The Traitor
By Octo
Submitted by Octomarine_, Feb 06 2012 08:03 PM | Last updated Feb 06 2012 09:58 PM
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First song updated again. Added a bunch more stuff this time and made some very important edits like reducing tempo. Seemed like a good idea back then and it seems like a good idea right now. The new few parts make the name of the song, trying to make it dark, eerie, or stressful; only getting the dark and eerie part imo but I want all three.
Oh well.
EDIT: Also, give criticism if you want, whether it's from increasing dynamics or from changing an entire verse line.
EDIT #2: Also, this is probably halfway-finished. Gonna make it hopefully to around 3-4 minutes because apparently 1-2 minutes songs aren't goddamn good enough.
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3 Comments
TwistedFireX
Feb 06 2012 09:12 PM
Octomarine_
Feb 06 2012 09:53 PM
Other people who compose equally as good or are better are Museline, Starwars, and Tsukasa. Check their stuff out.
~Star~
Feb 07 2012 12:55 PM
I love this song, it carries all the power a conventional orchestral song should and has all the intricacies to make it incredibly interesting. I'd love to give this a more in-depth review, so please finish it if it's a work in progress, and if you consider it done I'd say there needs to be a lot more before I consider it a full song. Like a more traditional ending.