I feel like the "end" isn't as strong as it could be... I'm unsure
Also, any feedback is appreciated.
this is a loop

<a href="https://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/miscellaneous/loop/unnamed-project-unf-r75097" class="onebox" target="_blank" rel="noopener">https://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/miscellaneous/loop/unnamed-project-unf-r75097</a>\nI feel like the “end” isn’t as strong as it could be… I’m unsure \nAlso, any feedback is appreciated. \nthis is a loop

Unnamed Project (unf)