Im new :3 first song :D i need feedback on this.

<p><a href="https://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/video-games/other3/want-you-gone-wip-beginning-r70499" class="onebox" target="_blank" rel="noopener">https://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/video-games/other3/want-you-gone-wip-beginning-r70499</a></p>\n<p>Im new :3 first song <img src="/images/emoji/twitter/smiley.png?v=9" title=":smiley:" class="emoji" alt=":smiley:"> i need feedback on this.</p>

Want you gone (W.I.P) Beginning