And here is the song! What do you all think? any ideas or help?

Comments and critics are always apprieciated!

<a href="https://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/metal-rock/metal/metallic-faith-r69133" class="onebox" target="_blank" rel="noopener">https://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/metal-rock/metal/metallic-faith-r69133</a>\nAnd here is the song! What do you all think? any ideas or help?\nComments and critics are always apprieciated!

Metallic Faith